七絕.寒潮外九首.梁繼權（涼亭） <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">七絕.寒潮外九首?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">梁繼權（涼亭）作品輯錄?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">北國風光?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">冬季云羅舞步忙?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">無常有意散瓊芳。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">河山素裹成一色，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">天降神工畫雪鄉(xiāng)。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">鄉(xiāng)愁?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">升曦親探坐東堤，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">風亦溫柔拽襯衣。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">與我話多南北嘮，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">一直聊到月偏西。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">摘懸月?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">杯舉抬頭向九天，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">寒星眼眨亦無眠。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">杜康下肚摘懸月，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">醉了相思釀惘然。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">胡楊?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">冬日云羅刻意來，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">驚魂麻雀躲窩猜。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">新寒不屑胡楊站，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">敢把飛瓊攬入懷。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">詠柿?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">懸掛枝頭似盞燈，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">浮云飄過不心驚。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">霜來雁去依然在，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">面對東西南北風。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">牽牛花?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">欲越籬墻別舊家，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">平身移步向天崖。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">行將高處伸頭望，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">風過吹蔫小喇叭。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">麻雀?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">閑聚寒枝當戲堂，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">憑空猶在唱花腔。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">是非置外嘉賓雀，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">個個自封鳥大王。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">雪花3?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">寒意爽約早早來，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">翩翩飛絮落階臺。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">天光山色重重色，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">放眼茫茫一片白。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">放歌喉?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">黃河九字寫風流，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">吟唱千年小曲憂。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">今將盈水重疏理，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">奔騰一路放歌喉。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">寒潮?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">來客紛紛敲我窗，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">小屋亦感透心涼。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">筆描墨弄詞窮盡，?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">忍看冰蝶羽翼忙。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">注：①詩以新韻。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">②圖片截于網(wǎng)絡。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">作者簡介：?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"> 梁繼權，筆名涼亭，軍轉(zhuǎn)，中共黨員，河北籍，現(xiàn)戶籍于銀川市并居住。歷任團總支書記、中專學校秘書、星連文學社副社長、《思歸客》特邀作家，主編巜中國當代傳世詩文大辭典》、《感動中國的醉美詩文》；執(zhí)行主編《中國當代詩人詩選》；《中華民間實力詩人》副主編；《中國當代詩人詩歌精選》編委。作品發(fā)表于《中國當代詩詞》、《文學經(jīng)典.詩文精選》、《風華絕代.經(jīng)典作家文選》、《中國當代詩歌典籍》、《中國風》、《新詩百年.中國當代詩人佳作選》、《當代詩人原創(chuàng)詩歌作品選》等多部。通訊報道等文學作品散見于《人民日報》、《文學青年》、《寧夏日報》、〈百度.涼亭（梁繼權）經(jīng)典語錄／名句〉、〈頭條〉、〈搜狐〉、〈星連文學社〉等報刊雜志和網(wǎng)絡媒體。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"> 我的詩學觀點：?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"> 1、不管是寫古詩詞（律、絕）還是寫現(xiàn)代詩，凡稱詩得有韻，但對于所謂的“擠韻”等說法，不才卻不敢茍同。無韻不成詩，不可將律、絕寫得沒有了格律、韻腳，可又千萬不能拘泥于律、韻而損傷主題和意境；也不可把現(xiàn)代詩寫成雜文、散文、哲理短句。詩，讀起來得朗朗上口，有回味，耐咀嚼。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"> 2、詩者抒情，要發(fā)自肺腑，既體現(xiàn)個性，又不失共性，這樣方可引起讀者的共鳴；詩者敘事，要圍繞主題思想，并賦予社會屬性。一首詩，不管羅列多少個場景和事件，最終還是要表現(xiàn)一個主題，一滴水見太陽嗎！再短的詩、文亦不外乎如此。 ?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"> 3、詩要有言外之意，意境之美，讓枯燥的文字動起來，巧用動詞并叫它在該呆的位置上，給讀者以畫面感，讓讀者有揣摩的余地。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"> 4、寫律、絕多學古人，但不可邯鄲學步，我們?nèi)祟愒缇碗姛綦娫挘⑿盼膫?，百度搜狐了，還動筆就來燭什么光的、素什么箋的，揮筆潑墨合上時代的節(jié)拍，謳歌現(xiàn)實生活中的精彩才最精彩！燭、箋只是兩個不同的漢字，當然，在特定場合還是可用的。寫出通俗易懂、內(nèi)含深刻、意境優(yōu)美的作品，才能流傳千古。如《湖州竹枝詞》作者／張雨?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">臨湖門外是儂家，郎若閑時來吃茶。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">黃土筑墻茅蓋屋，門前一樹紫荊花。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">這是約700年前元朝詩人張雨的一首頗具傳奇色彩的情詩。這首詩只所以能夠流傳這么多年，就在于作者構(gòu)思巧妙，主題明確，一氣呵成，真實地反映了女主人公本真的赤裸的內(nèi)心活動，語言樸實無華，但讀來卻朗朗上口，回味無窮。又如李白的《望廬山瀑布》：?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">日照香爐生紫煙，遙看瀑布掛前川。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">飛流直下三千尺，疑是銀河落九天。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"> 5、寫詩別玩深奧，湊對仗，力求讀來上口，略思有味。例如拙作七絕《茉莉花》（新韻），看似寫花香，倒不如說是在喻人之美：?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">初綻三湘半露頭，瞬間四鎮(zhèn)百花愁。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">籬笆萬紫失七色，惟有一香醉九州。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">拙作又如《吊蘭》（新韻）：?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">陋室吊蘭寂寞垂，抬頭眺望盼曦歸。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">簾風推搡煩騷客，且待光揉不瞅誰。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">形象地描寫了吊蘭寂寞難耐又渴望光明的這么一個主題。植物花草都那么怕陰暗，況且我們?nèi)祟惸?？在詩中，寫啥不見啥又賦予其廣泛的社會意義和人生哲理，就更有嚼頭了。如拙作七絕.《雪花》①（新韻）：?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">結(jié)伴風聲遠道來，佛門躲過近秦淮。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">坊間一落紅塵染，滌入支流不見白。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">再例如拙作七絕《路上雪大》（新韻）：?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">幾車遭遇幾家愁，路上拋錨上帝求。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">煙點三支云不散，征人一瞬煞白頭。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor">看似寫雪大，倒不如說是在闡述勞動人民的疾苦、生活得多么不易！?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"> 一管之見，勿噴。?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size: 18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br>?</span></span></p>