<p class="ql-block">特別聲明：【加強(qiáng)連】聯(lián)對(duì)集錦成刊，均已得到參與成員的授權(quán)。</p><p class="ql-block">附：</p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian9.cn/3rp9w0wx?from=copy_link&um_rtc=7c2448e02706503a6752b955a1d6766f&share_depth=1&first_share_to=copy_link&v=7.2.0&user_id=660512&share_from=self&first_share_uid=660512&share_user_mpuuid=bdeae43a596636ac252699c7d2d63965" target="_blank" data-link="create">【加強(qiáng)連】審稿及組稿成員個(gè)人主頁(yè)鏈接</a></p> <p class="ql-block">11.27出句:</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p> <p class="ql-block">對(duì)句精彩呈現(xiàn)：</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">賢母護(hù)園育棟梁（墨緣）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">還思短譜曲成長(zhǎng)（墨緣）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">往來(lái)歲月絆眉間（墨緣）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">猶懷好夢(mèng)道修真（楊柳岸)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">儉德持家出棟梁（楊柳岸)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">榮枯意象種田頭（楊柳岸)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">莫傷往事夢(mèng)翻新（鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">良品傳家勝宅田（鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">窮達(dá)歲月逝塵間（鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng))</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">美酒酬賓若蜜糖（松云客）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">好圓舊夢(mèng)墨留香（松云客）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">榮枯歲月寄云端（松云客）</p> <p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">智叟進(jìn)言笑古今（閑云）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">唯期暮色景如初（閑云）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">酸甜歲月記心間（閑云）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">名畫(huà)贈(zèng)君勝酒茶（山泉清清）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">唯求遲暮筆耕勤（山泉清清）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">落升日月沐情懷（山泉清清）</p> <p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天）</p><p class="ql-block">寧為殘燭淚流干（長(zhǎng)安山石）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天）</p><p class="ql-block">箴句進(jìn)言育棟梁（長(zhǎng)安山石）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天）</p><p class="ql-block">古今風(fēng)雨載書(shū)中（長(zhǎng)安山石）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">寶劍贈(zèng)君合性情（洗書(shū)閣)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">何勞遺世蝶迷莊（洗書(shū)閣)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">往來(lái)日月照天心（洗書(shū)閣)</p> <p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">休貪整日酒斟干（云朵）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">小字贈(zèng)妻如蜜糖（云朵）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">悲歡歲月雋心間（云朵）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">健筆成章論古今（秋實(shí))</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">居然天意夢(mèng)成真（秋實(shí))</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">沉浮歲月記心間（秋實(shí))</p> <p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">猶思晚趣筆揮歡（文心）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">雅墨贈(zèng)鄰慰梓桑（文心）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">輸贏朝野入杯中（文心）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">絕藝授徒重德仁（錢(qián)云金雨)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">去來(lái)風(fēng)雨斂胸間（錢(qián)云金雨）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">唯嗟此日事無(wú)成（錢(qián)云金雨)</p> <p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">莫追往事藝研新（綠水無(wú)憂(yōu)）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">警句予人強(qiáng)蜜糖（綠水無(wú)憂(yōu)）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底（問(wèn)天)</p><p class="ql-block">縱橫風(fēng)雨蹙眉間（綠水無(wú)憂(yōu)）</p> <p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：</p><p class="ql-block">本期出句為一組敘事義理聯(lián)，對(duì)句難度偏高。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">出句一：</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老，仄仄平平平仄仄句式，</p><p class="ql-block">只珍惜余生可以將書(shū)一直讀下去，直至終老，當(dāng)是嗜書(shū)如命的文人心聲。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老</p><p class="ql-block">猶懷好夢(mèng)道修真</p><p class="ql-block">讀書(shū)修道，何等愜意！</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">但惜余生書(shū)讀老</p><p class="ql-block">寧為殘燭淚流干</p><p class="ql-block">為書(shū)消得人憔悴，定是嗜書(shū)如命了！</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">出句二：</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉，中平仄仄中平仄句式，古語(yǔ)曰：“遺子黃金滿(mǎn)籯， 不如一經(jīng)?！焙脮?shū)即是傳家寶， 把優(yōu)質(zhì)的書(shū)籍留贈(zèng)給子孫勝過(guò)金銀珠寶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉</p><p class="ql-block">儉德持家出棟梁</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">好書(shū)遺子賽金玉</p><p class="ql-block">良品傳家勝宅田</p><p class="ql-block">以?xún)€德，良品應(yīng)對(duì)，上聯(lián)言物，下聯(lián)言品，頗有些忠厚傳家的味道。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">出句三：</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底，中仄平平平仄仄句式，</p><p class="ql-block">國(guó)家的盛衰都記錄于筆下。此處山河應(yīng)是江山，國(guó)土意。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底</p><p class="ql-block">榮枯歲月寄云端</p><p class="ql-block">興廢～榮枯，山河～歲月 ，筆底～云端，一收一寄，工整漂亮！尾三字寄云端尤其出彩！</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底</p><p class="ql-block">窮達(dá)歲月逝塵間</p><p class="ql-block">同理，興廢～窮達(dá)，山河～歲月，筆底～塵間，一收一逝，亦是工整漂亮！</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">興廢山河收筆底</p><p class="ql-block">輸贏朝野入杯中</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)仗工整，尾三字入杯中有韻味！</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">限于篇幅，選取有代表性的對(duì)句簡(jiǎn)評(píng)一二，其余對(duì)句不再一一列舉。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">縱觀本期對(duì)句，佳聯(lián)不勝枚舉。非常欣喜地看到眾聯(lián)友在加強(qiáng)連每周三練外加一期臨屏對(duì)句的錘煉下取得了長(zhǎng)足進(jìn)步。</p><p class="ql-block">例如：</p><p class="ql-block">出句中有興廢一詞，應(yīng)對(duì)時(shí)除使用并列詞組，還考慮到了一正一反的組合，使用枯榮、窮達(dá)、輸贏、悲歡、酸甜、縱橫等等應(yīng)對(duì)，在詞性對(duì)仗方面自我要求嚴(yán)格。</p><p class="ql-block">出句中的組合方位詞筆底，除個(gè)別聯(lián)友，都能夠準(zhǔn)確地選擇應(yīng)對(duì)詞，如云端、眉間、塵間、杯中等等。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">以上簡(jiǎn)評(píng)僅代表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，因?qū)W識(shí)水平有限，難免有疏漏和不妥之處，歡迎各位師友予以指正！??????</p> <p class="ql-block">指導(dǎo)：芳草</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：云朵</p><p class="ql-block">審閱：芳草、楊柳岸、朱簡(jiǎn)、松云客、文心、鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng)、云朵</p><p class="ql-block">組稿：墨緣、<span style="font-size: 18px;">楊柳岸、鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng)、松云客、閑云、</span>山泉清清、<span style="font-size: 18px;">長(zhǎng)安山石、洗書(shū)閣、云朵、秋實(shí)、</span>文心、錢(qián)云金雨、綠水無(wú)憂(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">（排名依投稿順序）</p><p class="ql-block">編錄：云朵</p>