<p class="ql-block">出句:易約清風(fēng)難約月;(流星)</p><p class="ql-block">點(diǎn)評(píng):流星</p><p class="ql-block">參與:八九群聯(lián)友</p><p class="ql-block">美編:簡(jiǎn)靜</p> <p class="ql-block">總評(píng):出句源于星期三那天群里很多人拍明月照片分享出來(lái)的靈感。說(shuō)是2022年最大最圓的月亮。</p><p class="ql-block">清風(fēng):清微的風(fēng);清涼的風(fēng)。明月清風(fēng)猶清風(fēng)明月。 比喻超塵脫俗的悠閑生活。出句想表達(dá)的是清風(fēng)不請(qǐng)自來(lái),隨時(shí)隨地都可以相約。但月亮?xí)芷渌淮_定因素影響,故用了兩個(gè)反義字“難”“易”來(lái)加深語(yǔ)境,來(lái)突出美好的事不是想約就能約到的。對(duì)句若轉(zhuǎn)折來(lái)補(bǔ)充為佳。</p> <p class="ql-block">甲一</p><p class="ql-block">自@陶然: </p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">閑敲棋子靜敲詩(shī)</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):清風(fēng)易得月難求,對(duì)句轉(zhuǎn)得比較好,閑暇之余下下棋、寫寫詩(shī),有種知足常樂的人生態(tài)度值得點(diǎn)贊。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">甲二</p><p class="ql-block">婁東客:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">動(dòng)觀流水靜觀山。</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):智者樂水仁樂山,灑脫的人生態(tài)度。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">甲三</p><p class="ql-block">詩(shī)韻凝香: </p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">多言壯志少言愁。</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):若明月清風(fēng)不可兼得時(shí),也不過于悲觀,幾度風(fēng)雨幾度春秋,少年壯志不言愁。</p> <p class="ql-block">優(yōu)秀</p><p class="ql-block">賈保寧: </p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">可言壯志不言愁。</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):同甲三,不再評(píng)??勺植粔蚩隙ā?lt;/p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">優(yōu)秀</p><p class="ql-block">竹溪:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">不悲落日卻悲秋。</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):落日指夕陽(yáng),喻指晚年。秋,有蕭條之境,也有豐收之意,后三轉(zhuǎn)成暖色調(diào)較好。</p> <p class="ql-block">所有對(duì)句</p><p class="ql-block">1楊梅水中人:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">喜聽暴竹怕聽雷。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2晨曦A:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">先為嫩綠后為楹。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">3從來(lái)如來(lái):</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">常求適意不求奢。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">4詩(shī)韻凝香:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">多言壯志少言愁。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5霞:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">寧當(dāng)脩竹不當(dāng)蘿。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">6馳鵬:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">急彈錦瑟緩彈箏。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7仰望星空:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">能成大器必成名。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">8簡(jiǎn)而言之:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">遠(yuǎn)迎稀客近迎親。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">9蘇淺淺:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">常求自在不求全。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10殷祥光:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">輕言遠(yuǎn)志重言才。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">11陌上桑??????:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">濃斟美酒淡斟茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">12謝子衿:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">可憐白發(fā)復(fù)憐春。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">13李尋歡:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月=</p><p class="ql-block">多追大道少追星</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">14言初:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">為思莼味倍思鄉(xiāng)。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">15紫霞:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">獨(dú)憐春色不憐秋。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">16幸福方來(lái):</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">朝觀曉日晚紅霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">17如寶江山:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">仁宜峻嶺智宜川。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">18自@陶然:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">閑敲棋子靜敲詩(shī)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">19厚德載物:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">多聽忠告少聽閑。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">20天涯一念:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">多栽玉竹少栽花。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">21春華秋實(shí):</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">來(lái)無(wú)遠(yuǎn)影去無(wú)聲。</p><p class="ql-block">注:風(fēng)來(lái)無(wú)影月去無(wú)聲[呲牙][呲牙][呲牙]</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">22趙豐泳:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)歌明月短歌風(fēng)。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">23尋找心靈家園:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">多逢美女少逢緣。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">24七夜:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">多喝喜酒少喝茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">25秋滋味:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">濃煎丹藥淡煎茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">26七夜:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">多看諾妹少看哥。[得意]</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">27感悟:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">輕于柳絮重于霜。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">28滄浪之水:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">不憐花事獨(dú)憐春。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">29遜雪輸梅:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">遙陪翠嶺近陪松</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">30順風(fēng)????:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">只求百度不求人。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">31清溪釣客:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">唯拋茍利不拋廉。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">32申歌沁韻:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">愁逢白雪喜逢春。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">33竹溪:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">不悲落日卻悲秋。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">34禿垂叟:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">行同小異不同謀。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">35紅豆:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">能書落日不書霜</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">36達(dá)嶸:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">多種香菜少種花。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">37牧翁:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">宜求淡水忌求茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">38戒言:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">不行煙雨能行云。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">39達(dá)嶸:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">多澆香菜少澆花。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">40大腳:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">深嘗烈酒淺嘗茶。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">41明月清風(fēng):</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">朝觀旭日暮觀星。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">42賈保寧:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">可言壯志不言愁。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">43百里之才:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">先期白雪后期春。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">44觀山不老:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月,</p><p class="ql-block">常逢碧草罕逢蘭。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">45淚中魚:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">好交君子不交狼。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">46霜晨月:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">常斟夜色偶斟愁。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">47婁東客:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">動(dòng)觀流水靜觀山。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">48高山景行</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月,</p><p class="ql-block">快收春色慢收秋。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">49星星知我心:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月</p><p class="ql-block">多言志趣少言情</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">50高歌追夢(mèng)孫寶山:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">難澆麗日易澆花。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">51老墨:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">每懷修竹不懷花。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">52淮潁:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">靜觀幽谷動(dòng)觀云。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">53安娜老爸:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">常緣絲雨偶緣云。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">54弄花香滿衣:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">不藏銀幣只藏書。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">55亦學(xué):</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">多揮熱汗少揮春。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">56光明:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">常書小草也書梅。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">57股礪人生:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月,</p><p class="ql-block">多存佳句少存錢。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">58亞市書蠹:</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月</p><p class="ql-block">常期瑞雪更期梅</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">59浮云帆影</p><p class="ql-block">易約清風(fēng)難約月;</p><p class="ql-block">閑斟濁酒忙斟茶。</p>