<p class="ql-block"><i style="font-size:22px;">《筆墨軒》楹聯(lián)作業(yè)第（005）期</i></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">本周長/金禾秋韻</p><p class="ql-block">主審/味易</p><p class="ql-block">制刊/金禾秋韻</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7. 18日楹聯(lián)作業(yè)</p><p class="ql-block"><i style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">上句 ：曉鏡但愁云鬢改（李商隱）</i></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">下句：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">1.晚妝應(yīng)恨夕陽留（淡煙細(xì)雨）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">2.春筵且喜玉杯傾（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">3.秋花更恨夕陽催(風(fēng)鈴度)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><i style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">4.夜燈常伴楚詞吟（金禾）</i></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">5.夜船猶聽玉簫鳴（夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><i style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">6.秋窗常怕暮雨敲（靜水）</i></p><p class="ql-block">雨仄應(yīng)平</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">改:夜窗又見雪花飄（靜水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">7.秋堂又見月輪懸（夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">8春窗又見柳眉開(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:18px;">9春窗應(yīng)覺淚光寒(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:18px;">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.19楹聯(lián)作業(yè)</p><p class="ql-block"><i style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">上句：嶺樹重遮千里目（柳宗元）</i></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">下句：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">1.江風(fēng)已送五更帆（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block">重，濃重，形容詞，原對是：江流曲似九回腸，曲，曲折，形容詞；已副詞，從寬了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">2.風(fēng)泉忽洗一時心（淡煙細(xì)雨）</span></p><p class="ql-block">見上，忽副詞，從寬了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">3.江帆已去九回腸（夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block">見上，已副詞，從寬了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">4.笛音唯訴萬般愁（靜水）</span></p><p class="ql-block">見上，唯副詞，從寬了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">5.羌笛曲訴九回腸(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block">見上，此曲有曲子之義，名詞</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">6.峰巒又秀萬千坊(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block">嶺樹偏正，峰巒并列。另見上，又副詞，從寬了。上有千字</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">7.山花競?cè)緷M天霞(風(fēng)鈴度)</span></p><p class="ql-block">見上，競動詞，從寬了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">8.江樓空見幾顆星（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block">見上，空副詞，從寬了</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.20楹聯(lián)作業(yè)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">上句；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">疏松影落空壇靜（ 韓羽）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">下句；</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">1.，薄霧陰垂曲徑幽（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">2.野蓼香浮一沼幽(淡煙細(xì)雨）</span></p><p class="ql-block">一數(shù)目詞，宜對數(shù)目詞</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">3.瘦鶴聲傳深谷幽（靜水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">4.野鶴聲穿深谷寧(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">5.亂絮香迷陋室深(草莓)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">6.弱草珠懸細(xì)雨綿（靜水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">7.瘦水聲消野渡荒（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">8.殘夢情留半月寒 (風(fēng)鈴度)</span></p><p class="ql-block">傳統(tǒng)對句中“半”用作數(shù)目詞</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">9.深谷溪流小洞幽（夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.21楹聯(lián)作業(yè)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">上句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">萬里悲秋常作客（杜甫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">下句：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">1.孤窗澹月獨思君（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">2.一行歸雁共鳴霞(淡煙細(xì)雨）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">3.一宵高枕亦無憂（靜水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">4.一聲短笛又懷人（夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">5.三更綺夢又思親（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">6.一簾幽夢忽還鄉(xiāng)(風(fēng)鈴度) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">7.半堤高柳盡鳴蟬（夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block">萬里悲秋應(yīng)是深秋，而高柳盡鳴蟬應(yīng)是盛夏，隔景了</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">改:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">半籬寒菊正飛鴻 （夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">8.無邊苦雨更思鄉(xiāng)（靜水）</span></p><p class="ql-block">好</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">9.千帆碧海共乘風(fēng)（夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block">碧顏色詞，宜對顏色詞</p><p class="ql-block">改:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">千帆深海共乘風(fēng) （夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?半籬寒菊正飛鴻 （夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.22楹聯(lián)作業(yè)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">上句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">漢口夕陽斜渡鳥（劉長卿）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">下句：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">1.瀟湘秋水遠(yuǎn)歸舟 （金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">2.湘江秋雨近歸漁（夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block">夕陽秋雨不諧。歸漁牽強(qiáng)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">3.長沙岳麓散流霞（草莓）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">4.瀟湘橘苑橫落花（草莓）</span></p><p class="ql-block">橫著怎會落下？</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">5.嶗山蕭寺遠(yuǎn)鳴鐘（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">6.天涯客子暗思鄉(xiāng)（靜水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">7.灞橋春柳送離人(風(fēng)鈴度) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">8.香山楓葉醉流霞(風(fēng)鈴度) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">9.洞庭秋雨亂流波（金禾）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block">夕陽秋雨不諧</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">10.梁園煙柳亂鳴蟬（夢天行）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">11.家山秋草細(xì)吟蛩(風(fēng)鈴度) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">12.錦江春色醉游人(風(fēng)鈴度) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">?</span></p>