對(duì)對(duì)子悠然?平 <p class="ql-block">秋隨北雁南飛去</p><p class="ql-block">雪應(yīng)紅梅降下來(lái)</p><p class="ql-block">南，方位名詞，降，動(dòng)詞。微調(diào)更好。</p><p class="ql-block">改：秋隨北雁南飛去 </p><p class="ql-block"> 雪應(yīng)紅梅天上來(lái)</p>