<p class="ql-block">指導(dǎo)老師:張伯利 男,1953年6月出生,籍貫,陜西長(zhǎng)安,陜西省詩(shī)詞學(xué)會(huì)顧問(wèn),咸陽(yáng)老年大學(xué)詩(shī)詞鑒賞班老師。</p> <p class="ql-block"><b>詩(shī)詞鑒賞班</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b>2025年春季班第二次作業(yè)</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b>五律或七絕</b>·<b style="font-size:20px;">三月</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 老師: 張伯利?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律 三月石板夾縫的小草</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">謙恭??思?,毫厘可為家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">石板時(shí)時(shí)擠,青鮮日日發(fā)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春風(fēng)詢(xún)舊事,明月?lián)嵝卵俊?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夾縫生存累,心祈一朵花。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1. 高飛行</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 七絕 三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃紅十里鳥(niǎo)啾啾,浩渺煙波逐小舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月風(fēng)光何處好,咸陽(yáng)湖畔客如流。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2.李萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律·三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柔湖映日丹,暖靄繞堤灘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳線(xiàn)牽云影,鳧雛戲水漣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">神迷春圃處,曉看市塵間。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">未返香盈袖,蝶飛我欲仙。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3. 曹少萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律?夢(mèng)春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">提籃野菜搜,起鏟喜心頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">村口梅花燦,河堤柳絮悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">南山苞蕾密,北嶺麥苗稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">窗外黃鸝叫,華胥一夢(mèng)游。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">4. 賀勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 七絕 三月遇戰(zhàn)友張君</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月春風(fēng)迎戰(zhàn)友,張君酒醉話(huà)黏稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那年重慶離別后,揮手乘船下鄂州。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">5. 王云武</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月(舞娘)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仙指甩掛云霧起,腰擺靈動(dòng)風(fēng)旋急。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">面如桃花丹鳳眼,醉了少年郎身許。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">6. 毛應(yīng)林 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律.農(nóng)歷三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遠(yuǎn)山石色綠,湖岸柳芽新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">魚(yú)躍漣漪水,鹮翔倒影云,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清明花散瓣,谷雨露濕襟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">似感衣衫厚,方知又一春。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">7.張向榮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 七絕 三月(騎游)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暖日古城浮紫煙,桃花初綻競(jìng)爭(zhēng)妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渭河側(cè)畔人熙壤,魚(yú)躍留痕入畫(huà)箋。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">8. 孫寶玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 五律 三月春夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖光映月明,巢少鳥(niǎo)無(wú)聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">靠岸船燈火,微風(fēng)枝葉青。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">石橋流水緩,波浪皺紋輕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遙望寒星閃,梅開(kāi)樹(shù)暗紅。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">9. 韋萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七絕 三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒冬歸隱越華山,春色如潮拂北塬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖畔鵝黃追燕舞,晚霞也戀嶺梅園。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">10. 郭有成</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月?觀(guān)玉蘭花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深藏蓄勢(shì)已一冬,春來(lái)綻放露華容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乳洗白蝶先飛起,胭脂紅蛹更濃情。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">11. 李?lèi)?ài)琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七絕·三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春分逐暖柳衣鮮,偶爾發(fā)彪瞬變顏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃李花容初綻放,朱鹮新客眾欣歡。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">12. 蒙吉品</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七絕·三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月春光滿(mǎn)眼收,桃紅柳綠染山頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶蜂起舞花叢里,田野牛犁日未休。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">13. 劉秦崗 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七絕.三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云攜喜訊沁芳叢,春醒山河著彩裳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雷震邀來(lái)金燕舞,柳簾漫卷碧波長(zhǎng)。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">14. 張桂玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月韻響</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春堤渭水誦聲揚(yáng),翠柳垂絲點(diǎn)鏡塘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更有詩(shī)濤添意趣,醉風(fēng)裊裊滿(mǎn)園香。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">15. 劉治 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪畔花千樹(shù),夭夭似火燃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疏林鳴翠雀,細(xì)雨破竹尖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風(fēng)過(guò)紅顏落,芽出碧玉牽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">物候皆有序,何必慕神仙</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">16. 麻亞梅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月春景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風(fēng)暖柳無(wú)力,飄落杏花雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月染春水,紫燕穿云梯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">橫波臥長(zhǎng)虹,芳草吐新綠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翁媼攜稚子,歡謔放紙鳶</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">17.吳惠琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七絕?三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仲春晝夜兩均分,蛙鼓蟲(chóng)鳴暖日曛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四季輪回皆過(guò)客,笑迎寒暑樂(lè)童心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">18.劉穎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律.三月赴姜嫄水鄉(xiāng)挖野菜(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春風(fēng)悄告息,薺菜正當(dāng)期。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">持鏟尋芳味,提籃裝野嬉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">粼粼漆水繞,碧碧草香襲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">共享鮮蔬韻,盈筐愜意離。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">19.杜寶軍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月踏青</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">九九風(fēng)兒暖,黃花陌上艷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舒心踏青游,愜意放足遠(yuǎn)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕歸識(shí)舊巢,雀勤覓新苑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">艷陽(yáng)燦燦照,知是三月三。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">20、楊繼康</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律?三月咸陽(yáng)湖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖畔歲紅初,風(fēng)光入畫(huà)殊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳條迎面拂,草色滿(mǎn)堤蘇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">快艇犁波浪,深林聞鷓鴣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">賞春何懼遠(yuǎn),處處客相呼。 </span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">21.燕小君</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">走進(jìn)三月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三春麗景榮,獨(dú)步渭河?xùn)|。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕舞山川秀,花開(kāi)柳岸紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">癡迷阡陌上,沉醉夢(mèng)懷中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一覽咸湖蕩,風(fēng)吹詩(shī)意濃。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">22. 李亞杰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五律 三月滇東南(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月彩云南,風(fēng)和草木鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梯田千面鏡,碩果滿(mǎn)山甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云霧繞村落,輕舟過(guò)洞天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">游人頻駐步,疑入武陵源。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>審核:張伯利 </u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>組稿:李萍</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>整理制作:李亞杰</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>圖片來(lái)自網(wǎng)絡(luò)</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>咸陽(yáng)市老年大學(xué)詩(shī)詞鑒賞班</u></i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b><i><u>2025. 3. 22.</u></i></b></p>