<p class="ql-block"> 夕陽西下，天空被晚霞點燃，色彩斑斕。余暉灑在湖面上，波光粼粼。晚風掠過，天籟漸歇，空氣中彌漫著淡淡的麥香、花香。大槐樹下，老人在竹椅上搖呀搖……你是否已陶醉在這夏日的傍晚中了？</p><p class="ql-block">五月第二期作業(yè)</p><p class="ql-block"> 題材：夏日的傍晚</p><p class="ql-block"> 題目：自擬</p><p class="ql-block"> 體裁：律詩（五律、七律皆可）</p><p class="ql-block">要求：頷聯(lián)或頸聯(lián)要用到重疊詞。</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.商懷禎 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚暴雨</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">避暑乘涼借綠蔭，輕搖蒲扇遠高溫。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽然平地起風暴，轉瞬晚霞換暮云。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雷雨嘩嘩聲貫耳，狂風烈烈樹拔根。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">天公肆虐人無奈，赤帝由來是暴君。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.朱信言</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">憶往昔龍口奪食日之山村薄暮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">連日同食宿，師生刈麥忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丹曦匿西嶺，冰鏡照東墻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">驟雨聲聲慢，荷風縷縷香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">頻頻揮汗水，侃侃話農桑。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3.蘇雪琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那年夏夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月色瀉清輝，星光聚柳眉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">輕風穿夏簟，故事綴紗帷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">片片白云散，離離碧葉垂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鄉(xiāng)音沉夢底，笑靨動心扉。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4.李萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日晚步</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暑氣隨昏斂，余輝幻夢柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬聲喧烈烈，荷影曳悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野徑尋芳入，閑心逐翠游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風挑河漢燭，星子墜云樓。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5.梁文輝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夕步郊外</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赤霞烙古城，緩步覓涼風。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">堤裂燕翻剪，葉枯心若冰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黯黯憫農月，迢迢織女星。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何因天不雨，禾怨垅無聲。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6.毛應林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖面晚霞落，廊橋燈火朦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">汗衫濕浸浸，扇子晃匆匆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘆密蛙焦噪，樹高蟬澀鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遙思秋氣爽，難舍夏荷紅。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7.吳惠琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄉(xiāng)村夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">綺霞浮壟陌，暑退晚風柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">裊裊炊煙起，悠悠笛韻稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">麥香盈野徑，蛙鼓伴溪流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">閑坐庭前月，清光入夢幽。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8.左紅艷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏夜即景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鳥歸霞影斂，日落暮暉藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">熠熠燈流彩，絲絲飯送香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黃童門口戲，白叟院中涼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">萬籟皆岑寂，闔家話正長。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9.李秦豫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日黃昏垂釣者</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">河岸染夕陽，釣翁收網忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竿稍留喜訊，水面泛祥光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">收獲欣欣愜，辛勞奕奕昌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">路人多羨慕，妒我滿行囊。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10.劉治</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">憶插隊時夏收</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">暑氣蒸騰日欲沉，田疇麥浪涌低云。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">揮鐮汗落絲絲雨，打場碡喧片片金。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">揚谷但期千斛凈，歸倉猶恐一塵侵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">終得囤滿沉沉睡，夢里白饃香齒唇。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11.景漫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨后暮園行 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">霽云散盡夕陽斜，碧沼浮光動草芽。 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">風送晚香穿竹徑，鳥銜余濕入藤花。 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">時逢歸雀喧高樹，次第華燈醒宿鴉。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">最愛新晴初月小，半城燈火共流霞。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12.劉穎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傍晚小區(qū)納涼</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">薔薇圍舍小園幽，向晚清涼景色柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">葉葉迎風拂面爽，鶯鶯囀曲愜心悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">茶浮月影人先醉，眸映星暉語始稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">閑坐暢談兒女事，夜深寂靜話方休。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13.李群</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚納涼</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">炎威向晚始初收，移榻青林傍碧流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹影漫搖歌愜意，荷風戲繞送清幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">流螢點點微光亂，朗月盈盈幻影浮。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐到夜深人籟寂，可知心靜是瀛洲。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14.王壽禮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傍晚河堤散步</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">漫步河堤凝翠香，粼粼碧水泛金光。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">空傳燕雀聲來去，樹綠亭欄影短長。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">逸逸情懷凝瑞氣，欣欣草木醉柔腸。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">微風拂面知人意，一路輕隨送晚涼。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">15.王彥飛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏晚咸陽湖</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">長堤閑步夕陽融，碎錦搖波映晚紅。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">滟滟湖光浮影影，雙雙鳧子戲叢叢。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">垂楊蘸霧書章草，拱橋銜月作彎弓。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">誰剪煙霞鋪作紙，水流猶筆寫空蒙。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">16.薛建設</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">城際夏收</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">斜日馀暉映水晴，晚涼習習夏風盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">河邊垂柳絲絲舞，街巷游人款款行。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">世紀花園花四季，蘭池月殿月三更。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">金黃麥熟抓時緊，耳畔常飄機器鳴。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">17.張生效</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">渭湖即興</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕暉將盡傍欄休，待把平湖夜色酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">掠水波微風細細，入林語脆鳥啾啾。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鷹閑悠剪青天緞，艇迅勇開白雪溝。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">詠意忽來欲乘興，又耽月怨柳梢頭。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">18.牛英茹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕陽一點如紅豆，已把情思灑滿衣。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">曲曲道中隨意走，蹺蹺板上盡情嬉。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">妹身輕晃君思妹，哥影微搖妹念伊。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">惟愿浮生執(zhí)子手，斜輝脈脈不相離。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">19.張陜樂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄉(xiāng)村的傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜幕徐徐拂面頰，云舒雨霽吐霓霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">槐影垂垂香滿岸，鶯歌恰恰韻傳佳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">耒耜勤耕臨野陌，桑麻閑話入田家。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">炊煙幾縷纏新月，漫把鄉(xiāng)情繞作花。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">20.趙華</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日黃昏</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">汀州亂鳥鬧平沙，落日西沉映晚霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月依依藏遠樹，湖波點點泛輕鴨。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一竿暮色蛙聲起，數(shù)頃方塘藕色佳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽有荷風香暗送，清涼吻過我額頰。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">21.美霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日家鄉(xiāng)的傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞裁角作紅紗，落日輕蒙赧臉頰。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸鳥翩翩穿翠柳，頑童蹦蹦逗灰鴨。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹笛馱起天星子，蒲扇搖出槐米花。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">炎夏鄉(xiāng)村夕色好，秦腔舞曲伴清茶。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">22.李愛琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">清波蕩漾映斜霞，湖岸盡開滕蔓花。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">月季四時常艷艷，繡球初夏炫華華。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">少年踏踏灌球跳，翁嫗盈盈擴體暇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">身在高樓常遠眺，溫馨燈火萬千家。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">23.何順永</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">絲絲柳線牽云淡，點點星光映水天。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陣陣荷香覺氣爽，沙沙葉舞伴神閑。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">風搖碧葉千波漾，月籠長堤百鳥緘。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐看蒼穹銀色美，清輝盡灑滿人間。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">24.劉文軒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傍晚游咸陽</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暮時分賞晚霞，咸陽湖面泛金沙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">黃鸝小憩憑河柳，紫燕低飛落樹丫。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">茂草青青新葉展，繁花朵朵俏顏佳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">紅男綠女逍遙秀，秦地秦人最愛家。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">25.南素華</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">觀賞至友石島新居夏日傍晚之后花園</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">遠離鬧港擇幽島，日落霞輝照舍園。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪水環(huán)宅千葦擺，銀鋤落地百花嫣。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">野菊燦燦懷元亮，石凳青青誦義山。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">藤下舉樽聊雅趣，知音情厚滿畦田。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">26.孫寶玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">初夏傍晚遇雨</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">熱氣蒸升天地燥，空中藍碧少積云。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">疾風導向匆匆至，濃霧鋪出緩緩分。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">傍晚陰沉無月色，戌時雨露叩窗音。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">甘霖久盼滋苗野，潤物輕聲自有溫。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">27.燕小君</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日歸鄉(xiāng)晚步</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">炎炎夏日返家鄉(xiāng)，向晚徐行覓嫩涼。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">裊裊柳絲牽客袂，粼粼波影浣霞光。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鳴鼓樂千重脆，風送禾田兩岸香。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲向黃昏賒斗酒，醉吟山水入詩囊。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">28.韓公元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄉(xiāng)村夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏來向晚不尋常，金麥豐收盡入倉。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">豪爽爺爺三碗酒，虔誠奶奶一根香。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">門前燈下腔酣肆，場里歌中舞醉狂。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">彎月夕陽同映照，吾村喜慶走康莊。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">29.安宗珍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日荷韻</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里湖濱夜景明，一池菡萏岸邊生。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">花開碧水朱妝點，葉舞銀塘綠染成。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">倩影亭亭明己志，幽香淡淡伴蛙聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷風送爽多詩意，月色朦朧繾綣情。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">終審:梁文輝 </p><p class="ql-block">組稿審核:李群</p><p class="ql-block">整理制作:王彥飛</p><p class="ql-block">圖片來自網絡</p><p class="ql-block">咸陽市老年書畫詩詞學會詩詞部</p><p class="ql-block">2025.6.8</p>