<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二零二六年二月上社課</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">要求：用平水韻六麻寫七言律詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刊頭題字 ：蔣孝余</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收集簡評 ：謝 勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇編輯 ：趙以順</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙學鵬】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">山 行</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遠罩陰霾近罩紗，山中臘月少煙霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荒村有路疑無路，病樹新痂覆舊痂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">問道無人風咶絮，推門有答扇吱呀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">炊煙不起風仍至，似問空巢第幾家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評：荒涼及目，山村索寞。一村無犬吠，窮屋少炊煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">立春日車行遵義至貴陽道中</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人事經年亂似麻，多緣陽錯與陰差。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">從來對酒因尋樂，不必吟春就訪花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歲暮已羞談理想，車輕宜合載煙霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身家長系房車上，枕過山崖又水涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評：節(jié)物感羈旅，游邊更苦辛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">立春后二日居海龍囤</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荒囤本是小天涯，苒苒春回待著花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卻道千年楊氏業(yè)，終歸萬載帝王家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雄才妄自稱慷慨，霸業(yè)何曾惜旮旯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一度東風今又至，再描新綠到傷疤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評：懷古之作，缺少跌宕起伏之感。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">臘月與播州匯川詩友訪滄海行芝麻山中</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">峰回又見石嵯岈，霧起難探路遠遐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雅集令呼情切切，刨豬飯惹眼巴巴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花隨我后來三月，詩占枝先發(fā)一茬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不忿東君不同往，歲殘更惜老蒹葭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評：憐君又惜君，世態(tài)自紛紜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">芝麻訪詩友孟天興，遇雨房車不能進，停半道，醉歸于車中宿，次日方回</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人車一體不分家，向晚旅居臨水涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">擇得山中鄰有孟，吟成筆下思無邪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">塵間瑣事非關己，網上圍觀仍吃瓜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蝶夢翩翩來午夜，再攜莊子品南華。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評：剡溪訪友，自在隨性。芝麻訪友，深杯契心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【劉先倫】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">訪友抒懷</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是日登臨不足夸，將身橫亙測天斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">煙云鎖路三千里，匯水成河一尺洼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">未盡塵緣銷白骨，何來因果毀詩家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">彈歌山下生民病，需用人間悟道茶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評：開合有度，結句有味。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【莊 紅】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">臘月訪友</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲路盤山凍雨霾，車徐難上野云崖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">逢人遠近三番問，分道崎嶇幾轉徘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">客慕林深多自在，君稱意寡與時乖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薄田十畝勞詩夢，幸有梅花倆看偕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評：客行滿山雪，香處是梅花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【周國慶】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">今夜，雨夾雪</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜雨聲中漫品茶，幾多往事任長嗟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曾因興盡愁空盞，何故悲來避細娃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五味雜陳心似梗，三更思緒亂如麻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曉風誤解斯人意，吹落梅花成雪花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評：窮愁盈雪屋，長笛吹梅花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【汪守先】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳歲尾</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萱闈葬后黯云加，歲末悲心亂若麻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山樓雨弄旋成淚，村野雪飄強作花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">思情長續(xù)人空夢，年味半消春自嗟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冥外清魂何處覓，祁寒酹酒朔風斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評：北堂攬陳跡，中夜起長悲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【梁正森】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">歲暮還家</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">進屋聞聲不見媽，弟兄從此各為家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋蓬散盡天涯遠，春雨流殘地角賒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夢里常存思母意，庭前猶見逐兒丫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我今頭白亂心緒，歲尾年頭獨嘆嗟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評：少裁風樹痛，無疾慰萱慈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【羅洪濤】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">歲末歸</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">放任蹄煙腋裹霞，脫弦離箭棄天涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">瀟湘暮苦燈籠雨，北斗神叨網約車。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">店主噓寒迎道客，空調問暖化冰花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三更雪夜朦朧里，半宿孤魂已到家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評：羈懷推去轂，風雪擁歸途。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【文受剛】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">熏臘肉</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清晨買捆柏香椏，小院窩棚日影斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夫架木柴妻掛肉，兒揩汗水女端茶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">濃煙淡處枝條引，烈焰騰時草葉遮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傍晚掌燈收拾后，金睛火眼淚如麻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">評：殷勤熏臘肉，取次就春醪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【周大中】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">山盆訪友</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">久慕雕龍心似沙，輕車一路入煙霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">導航屢誤通天路，幽草多尋處士家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閉戶清修花醉月，圍爐閑話韻分茶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白云深處種紅豆，已慣風霜早結痂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：紅豆，指紅豆杉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評：尋詩蒼海闊，訪友白云深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">赴海龍參加秉鋐詩社年會</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">韻筑蘭垣約試茶，輕車直向帝王家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">海龍囤上加微信，飛虎關前眺白沙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云聳空城威尚在，碑鐫霸業(yè)運偏差。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟旌起處春先到，嶺上枯枝漸著花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：白沙，指白沙河。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評：殘垣堪雅集，遺跡逐流風。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【趙以順】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">山 居</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一徑清幽到野家，數峰蒼翠入云涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">疏林帶霧藏輕鳥，淺瀨無風浣落花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">半畝青畦分秀色，數間茅舍隔塵沙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山中不記年和月，閑坐云邊看日斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評：山中樵斧爛，窗外白云深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【牟明英】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">偶 拾</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">獨行幽徑攝梅花，躡步亦驚枝上鴉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一陣輕飛聲散落，幾番低逐影橫斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">堪離堪合還堪怨，耐寂耐寒更耐嗟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">入世多逢難解結，風親雪擁任由他。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評：拾得幾分春意，另供感物情懷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【唐嘉誠】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午破五日，外曾祖潘紹臣本發(fā)先生后裔招飲新場桃子壩。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孟春景色最堪嘉，門外蕓苔一望遮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山北山南成偶聚，花開花落幾回嗟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">拾來舊事渾如夢，話到殘陽漸有涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫道歡愉真少見，不知月華已東斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評：相逢不令盡，別后為誰空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【謝 勇】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳賤降日</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自知陋質是蒹葭，淹忽勞生兩鬢華。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">業(yè)事從來非不力，橐囊比舊近浮夸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蕭疏境況簞瓢窘，偃蹇年光名利賒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">逼仄門庭空爾爾，老懷凄斷碧江涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">評：拙作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;">?</span></p>