<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陽春三月，煦風(fēng)輕拂，老年大學(xué)2026春季班開學(xué)了~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老校區(qū)新詩班第一課，同學(xué)們早早的來到學(xué)校，校門一開，大家陸續(xù)走了進(jìn)來。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔老師應(yīng)老年大學(xué)邀請，在繁忙的工作之余，抽出時(shí)間開設(shè)新詩班。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這是老年大學(xué)同學(xué)們的福音，是同學(xué)們對新詩知識(shí)的迫切渴望。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)趙主任，介紹了崔老師這些年所取得的成就，可謂成績斐然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔勇老師，學(xué)識(shí)淵博，筆耕勤奮，愛好廣泛，社會(huì)責(zé)任感強(qiáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迄今為止在國家、省、市報(bào)刊雜志發(fā)表詩歌、小說、散文、短劇、論文、歌詞等近500篇，分獲一、二、三等獎(jiǎng)多次。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出版教材《唐詩宋詞嘉年華》，《宋詞新音》和《小小說創(chuàng)作“三部曲”》等。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔老師曾在李滄區(qū)老年大學(xué)執(zhí)教詩詞班，教學(xué)方法深得學(xué)員喜愛。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔老師今天給我們講白話詩的起源，白話詩文的倡導(dǎo)先驅(qū)是郭沫若，胡適，聞一多等先輩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">課件展示~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十九世紀(jì)初期，出版的小學(xué)生初級(jí)課本選用的白話詩文。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大俗大雅。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我們熟悉的歌曲《蘭花草》，居然原作是胡適先生，而這樣朗朗上口的詩句，意思直白，雅俗共賞，所以流傳甚遠(yuǎn)，成為經(jīng)典。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩詞班人才濟(jì)濟(jì)，臥虎藏龍，東嶗詩社高繼瑤會(huì)長出新書了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高會(huì)長利用課間休息時(shí)間，給同學(xué)們簽名贈(zèng)書，他新書的名字叫《歲月吟唱》。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這本書是高會(huì)長才學(xué)的結(jié)晶，同學(xué)們收到帶著墨香的詩集，如獲至寶，上面有高會(huì)長的簽名，越加珍貴。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">拿到新書的魯玉華和高會(huì)長合影。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">部分同學(xué)手拿詩集，跟高會(huì)長合影留念。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">左起:魯玉華，高會(huì)長，李繼梅，陳志堅(jiān)。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高會(huì)長正在新書上給李學(xué)軍同學(xué)簽名。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秦大姐用手機(jī)記錄第一課的課堂畫面。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">同學(xué)們?nèi)褙炞⒌穆犞v，認(rèn)真的記筆記，像小學(xué)生一樣，因?yàn)槲覀儸F(xiàn)在最深刻的體會(huì)是學(xué)習(xí)機(jī)會(huì)的寶貴，要牢牢的抓住。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">課間休息結(jié)束~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔老師繼續(xù)上課，崔老師今天給大家?guī)砹速F重的見面禮:每人兩個(gè)橘子！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這橘子是實(shí)物教學(xué)的道具，崔老師讓我們觀察橘子，然后現(xiàn)場作一首詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">相同的兩個(gè)橘子，在不同的視角下，呈現(xiàn)不同的意境，有的看見光的陰晴，有的望見形狀想到它的味道，由小見大，有的體會(huì)到老師的大愛無疆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">同學(xué)們從各個(gè)不同的角度出發(fā)，詮釋了橘子在自己心中的感發(fā)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?仿照胡適的《蘭花草》，每人現(xiàn)場作詩一首，算是課堂作業(yè)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">劉衛(wèi)華劉大姐的第一課詩作；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 第一課</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在新詩黌堂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師贈(zèng)每人兩顆橙色的小球</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這是老師暖心的傳遞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是首創(chuàng)新詩的物像——橘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第一課上</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師從白話文的歷史淵源</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">講到現(xiàn)代新詩名人的作品欣賞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">邊學(xué)邊練</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贈(zèng)橘——開啟了老年學(xué)員創(chuàng)作新詩的希望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我是甜的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圓胖的小臉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兩道彎彎的眉梢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悄悄夸自己完美</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高興的紅了臉龐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心里，藏著一瓣蜜甜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">班長曲建慧現(xiàn)場做的一首小詩，運(yùn)用了擬人手法，寫的俏皮可愛。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秦國英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">師贈(zèng)橘，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">色紅鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">握在手，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倍感甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秦大姐寫的詩，短小精悍，內(nèi)涵豐富，老師也夸贊是濃縮的精品。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兩顆砂糖橘引發(fā)的詩意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者：徐茹冰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這溫暖的顏色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讓我想起冰心的《小桔燈》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">無論在何種境遇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">都要有一種向往光明的力量</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我久久凝望著它</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">它在初春的光影里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圓潤，溫暖，安靜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我怎舍得剝開它</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">竊取它的橙心橙意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">帶著老師的期待</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">帶著同學(xué)們的求知欲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一句句贊美，一首首新詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">賦予它很更多的美好寓意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這小小的橘，圓圓的笑臉，神采飛揚(yáng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">它似乎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">也在為我們鼓掌：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">銀發(fā)課堂，在三月啟航</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李繼梅作詩~</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一顆砂糖橘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">長在春風(fēng)里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏天花開過</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋果甜心里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師送我橘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橙黃掛綠枝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小小一顆果</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">酸甜記心里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自己感覺這兩首小詩，更像順口溜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師的見面禮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> ——記第一堂崔老師新詩課</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 李學(xué)軍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第一堂新詩課</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔老師送給我們</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每人兩個(gè)冰糖桔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小小的 圓圓的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">帶著新鮮的綠葉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">襯著嬌嫩的金黃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">像兩盞小小的燈籠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我捧在手心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心里暖暖的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師這份溫柔的心意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">溫暖了每一顆心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兩個(gè)冰糖桔緊緊相挨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">多像師生兩顆心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">貼得那么近</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那么親</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">感恩崔老師</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">帶我們走進(jìn)新詩的大門</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">教我們觀察，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">教我們品味</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">再教我們書寫如詩如畫的美篇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">結(jié)尾用了“美篇”二字，一語雙關(guān)，一個(gè)意思是美麗的篇章，另一個(gè)意思是美篇APP，正被大家廣泛應(yīng)用。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白話文課堂練習(xí)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者：劉兆蓮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沙糖橘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">開學(xué)第一課，老師分橘鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橙心綠葉裝，韻味品優(yōu)嘗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金橘桌上歡，入口潤心肝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">師生歌曲唱，引領(lǐng)天地寬。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橘子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老荷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在第一堂課上</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師贈(zèng)我一個(gè)小橘子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不，那是一個(gè)小燈籠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圓圓的，亮亮的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是讓它幫我尋找</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那顆丟掉的詩心</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橘頌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳志堅(jiān)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桌上放著兩枚小黃橘，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">似恩師風(fēng)骨韌如玉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如暖語聲聲來相護(hù)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">汁水清甜潤心田，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">恰似良言教誨暖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">謝師贈(zèng)橘意深長，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贈(zèng)我陽光與華章，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">點(diǎn)點(diǎn)溫潤我心房。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">攜此甘甜踏歌行，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">心向朝陽萬里明。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五絕 課堂沙糖桔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">魯玉華</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窗前橘溜圓，香馥橙紅涎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一口清甜脆，尊師自雋賢。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兩只橘子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萬勵(lì)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師發(fā)給我兩只橘子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一大一小，靜靜相依</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大的帶著兩片綠葉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">像揣著一抹春意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小的光潤，沒有葉子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卻透著溫柔氣息</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一樣金黃，一樣甜蜜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">各有各的好看</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">各有各的詩意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">捧在手心，輕輕歡喜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小小橘子，也藏著詩句</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一枚小橘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孫若睿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">綠葉，紅皮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一枚小橘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在你一身的圓潤里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我摸不到</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">你深藏的小核</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">正如我看不見</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">你翻山越嶺的足跡</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我知道</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">你一定可口香甜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">因?yàn)?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">你是遠(yuǎn)方的饋贈(zèng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩意的饋贈(zèng)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:芳草~</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師的沙糖桔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 孫光文</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">教室里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師的沙糖桔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">透著火紅的顏色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閃耀著光芒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">戴著綠色的樹葉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">擺在我們面前</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這不是</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讓我們嘗它的味道</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這是</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師的良苦用心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這是</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師教學(xué)藝術(shù)體現(xiàn)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兩顆沙糖桔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萬千新詩篇？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我們對事物</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">觀察不同</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我們對老師期望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">認(rèn)知不同</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我們寫的新詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百花齊放</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百家爭鳴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一石激起千層浪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兩指彈出不同音</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一場學(xué)新詩的活動(dòng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">序幕已經(jīng)拉開</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在老師的指導(dǎo)下</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新詩佳作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一定會(huì)像雨后春筍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">層出不窮</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小橘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山哥</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圓圓的小臉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">淡淡的清香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橙黃色的外衣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">觸摸著</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那一股子酸甜悄然潤出</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">流入了心懷</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《陽光下的沙糖桔》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳秀君</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新詩第一課，老師特意帶來沙糖桔。啟迪我們的詩興，感恩老師，這份良苦用心！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陽光下的沙糖桔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">熠熠生著輝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那油量油量的一抹橙啊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">甜了心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暖了魂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滋潤了詩眼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">開啟了詩夢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">因?yàn)樗鼇碜栽娗榈暮魡?lt;/span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兩顆小沙糖桔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 鄢冰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">開學(xué)第一課，老師送來2顆小沙糖桔，黃黃的，圓圓的。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一顆頭頂2片綠葉，一顆頭頂3片青葉 。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金黃配著翠綠，看著就心生歡喜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贈(zèng)果情尤重，師恩如桔甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讓這新學(xué)期，從一點(diǎn)甜開始！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二個(gè)橘子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">明先</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">課堂上</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師給每個(gè)學(xué)生送二個(gè)橘子。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紅橙色的外皮，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圓滾滾肚子。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">散發(fā)著誘人的清香，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">里面裝滿了老師的熱心和期待。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老年大學(xué)是棵大樹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老師是綠葉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我們學(xué)生就像在大樹和綠葉呵護(hù)下，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">會(huì)慢慢成熟起來的果實(shí)。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔老師拿出高會(huì)長的詩集，重點(diǎn)講了高會(huì)長1979年的詩作《新兵訓(xùn)練》。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高會(huì)長年輕時(shí)是一名海軍，這首詩是他1979年做的；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新兵訓(xùn)練</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">男兒立志習(xí)武</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">戰(zhàn)勝千難萬苦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">他日奔赴沙場</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橫刀立馬如虎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每行六個(gè)字，跟傳統(tǒng)的五言，七言不同，這是一種創(chuàng)新和突破。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這是一節(jié)別開生面的詩詞課，師生互動(dòng)，課堂氣氛熱烈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?我們在這節(jié)課上，鍛煉了自己的現(xiàn)場寫作能力，學(xué)會(huì)了細(xì)致觀察。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">做詩，貴在有一顆激情澎湃的心，詩是抒發(fā)情感的，由內(nèi)而外，先感動(dòng)自己才能感動(dòng)他人，要有一顆易感的心，對周圍事物懷有熱愛和敬意，永葆一顆年輕的心，我們將跟隨老師的步伐，在學(xué)詩的路上，永不止息。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲建慧班長的這首詩，總結(jié)的真好，只是對我個(gè)人的表揚(yáng)，有點(diǎn)汗顏，我又找不到替換的字，就尊重原詩吧:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">沃土新栽苗圃昌，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">園丁博學(xué)善導(dǎo)航。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">潤心啟智明思路，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翁媼詩山勇徜徉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">繼梅慧抒美篇現(xiàn)，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">師生同賦意氣揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今朝共沐詩風(fēng)暖，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歲歲書香滿課堂。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">附；崔老師作的圖片配詩文；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">毒藥的善意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">——公園美好瞬間</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">弱言</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一絲絲搖曳的柳枝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">染綠了他的上衣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">他高擎著噴藥的水槍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">打出了純潔的愛意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">dayue lai——</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我聞到的沒了毒藥味兒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">只有春天的花蕊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">dayao lai——</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">他哪是校正發(fā)音</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">他是給春天</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">校正了方向</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p>