【芳草園】聯對集錦（七百一十五）笛里關山 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特別聲明：【芳草園】聯對集錦成刊，均已得到參與成員的授權。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.kamkm888.com/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草園】 聯對集錦組稿成員主頁鏈接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">3月13日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖江波鷺影悠（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鳥婉如歌惹客迷（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">飲罷閑翁倚檻看（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙薄 (問天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細曉園桃靨濃 (張國福)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困 (問天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細如絲繡景明 (張國福)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑 (問天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">路過阿翁駐足觀 (張國福)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙薄 (問天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細芳園詩對濃 (小江魚)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困 (問天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月淡如紗惹夢長 (小江魚)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑 (問天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春到村姑折柳歌 (小江魚)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細庭園花霧濃（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳嫩如牽喚夢蘇（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨過黃鶯舒羽歌（愚夫）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水暖淝河魚影歡(小雨點)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花艷如妝惹蝶癡(小雨點)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">課罷先生觀鳥閑(小雨點)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖草原花色鮮 (北國之春)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨潤如酥醒曉酣 (北國之春)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">嬉罷老爹傾酒歌 (北國之春)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖曉畦花氣秾（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云逸漫游共老閑（老?。?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨后老翁播種忙（老?。?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細秋江漁火明（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細如酥潤物華（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨浣村姑搗衣歡（荷花）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙薄（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖林園杏蕊芳(高山流水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月瘦如鉤動客愁(高山流水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">帆啟舟人把釣歡(高山流水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細農田麥浪輕（楓葉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細如酥興物華（楓葉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">拾憶書翁濡墨思（楓葉）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙薄（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜靜別園花露濃（閑云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云密如敷添夜愁（閑云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕歇老翁落座安（閑云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細江堤花色萌（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖如醺引鳥眠（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">釣罷漁翁煮酒歡（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙薄（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水暖晴川花影濃 (A. 正群)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細如織潤柳蘇 (A. 正群)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">擺渡艄公喚客疾 (A. 正群)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪碎漁舟鳧影驚（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕語如歌伴午眠（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">棋罷老翁沽酒來（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨霽溪橋曉月斜（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月泄入流惹客思（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">釣罷老翁橫棹還（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云淡黃鶯水影深（劉義）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水暖如蒸臥鷺閑（劉義）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暖筑幼鴉銜草歡（劉義）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水暖融湖鴨影重（德旭）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨曠如援促草萌（德旭）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">炊竣娘親望野呼（德旭）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙薄（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細花蹊蝶影輕（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日麗如醺沐鳥眠（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">教罷師翁煮酒酣（文心）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日曖芳村竹淚盈（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云厚如飛覆地迷（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">釣罷老翁抱酒歡（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖芳郊花霧輕（元豐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖如偎醒夢頻（元豐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕罷野翁扶杖看（元豐）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕掠晴溪鳧影閑 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕語若珠透柳簾 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">釣罷漁翁提簍還 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云淡江天日影明 (鄉(xiāng)間晚風)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細如篩籠野愁 (鄉(xiāng)間晚風)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沽轉老翁負酒閑 (鄉(xiāng)間晚風)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙薄（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨歇芳洲鳥語稠（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖如熏醉燕居（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">炊罷阿娘倚戶催（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細倚園草色濃 (胡蘿卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雷響如推喚夢驚 (胡蘿卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">糶畢車夫標記歡 (胡蘿卜)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖梅園花氣清（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細如梳伴夢甜（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">耕轉農夫煮酒吟（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨細暮空湖水清(笛里關山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨密如悲羈客懷(笛里關山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">飯熟佳人斗草閑(笛里關山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙薄（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖游客歸意遲（運河）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖猶醺興酒閑（運河）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勝過春風逐夢高（運河）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙薄（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日朗清溪水影明 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月淡如憐動客愁 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">路過鄰翁頷首夸 (震撼哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風微春岸柳煙?。▎柼欤?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖晴川云影輕 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風柔似撫催春困（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖如醺引夢長 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學歸童子放鳶笑（問天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暖佳人攜燕歸 (美西洋)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">出句簡析：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首聯出句：風微春岸柳煙薄</p><p class="ql-block">聯意解析: 春景聯</p><p class="ql-block"> 風微：風很小、輕柔，即是和風、微風。</p><p class="ql-block"> 春岸：偏正式合成詞，春天的河岸、江岸、堤岸。</p><p class="ql-block"> 柳煙：春天柳樹剛發(fā)芽，嫩黃新綠、枝條朦朧，遠看像一層輕煙。</p><p class="ql-block"> ?。盒稳菰~，輕薄、淡薄、不濃重。</p><p class="ql-block">聯意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 微風輕拂著春日的堤岸，柳色如煙，霧氣輕薄。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句寫的是一派清新淡遠、寧靜柔和的早春風光。</p> <p class="ql-block">二聯出句：風柔似撫催春困</p><p class="ql-block">聯意解析：感懷聯</p><p class="ql-block"> 風柔：春風柔和、溫潤，不寒不烈，主謂結構。</p><p class="ql-block"> 似撫：好像在輕輕撫摸。</p><p class="ql-block">把風擬人化。</p><p class="ql-block"> 催春困：讓人泛起淡淡的春天的困意。</p><p class="ql-block"> “催”字用得極妙：不是強迫，是慢慢引出來。</p><p class="ql-block"> 聯意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 春風溫柔得像在輕輕撫摸，讓人不知不覺生出慵懶的春困。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句描繪了一幅極柔美、恬靜、充滿春日慵懶氣息的心境小景。</p> <p class="ql-block">三聯出句：學歸童子放鳶笑</p><p class="ql-block">聯意解析：敘事聯</p><p class="ql-block"> 學歸：放學歸來、學堂歸來。點明時間：放學后、傍晚前，正是孩童最輕松自在的時刻。</p><p class="ql-block"> 童子：孩童、小兒。</p><p class="ql-block"> 放鳶：放風箏。鳶即紙鳶，就是風箏。</p><p class="ql-block"> 笑：歡笑、嬉笑。</p><p class="ql-block">聯意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 放學回家的孩童，一邊放風箏，一邊歡快地笑。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句是是一幅充滿生機、溫暖明快、極具生活情趣的春日童趣圖。</p> <p class="ql-block">審閱：芳草 云朵 楊柳岸 朱簡 鄉(xiāng)間晚風 文心 笛里關山</p><p class="ql-block">簡評：笛里關山</p><p class="ql-block">組稿： 琢玉 張國福 小江魚 愚夫 一粒種子 北國之春 老丁 荷花 高山流水 <span style="font-size:18px;">紅葉醉秋 閑云 淡定 ANG.ZQ 元其 梧桐 劉義 德旭 文心 若水 元豐 燕燕于飛 鄉(xiāng)間晚風 云朵 胡蘿卜 </span>雨燕 笛里關山 運河泛舟 震撼哥 美西洋 </p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后為序）</p><p class="ql-block">編錄：笛里關山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 以上簡析僅代表個人觀點，因學識水平有限，難免有不妥之處，歡迎各位師友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句為芳草老師精選集句</p><p class="ql-block">②對句為師友們原創(chuàng)</p><p class="ql-block">③圖片為本人隨拍</p>