<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者：胡楊林的回憶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朗誦：空谷怡蘭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇：1341463</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圖片：網(wǎng)絡(luò)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">英烈在泥土里，種下整個(gè)春天。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:right;"><span style="font-size:22px;">——題記</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨是豎著落的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">像時(shí)間的針腳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">把四月的信紙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">縫進(jìn)大地的眼角</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">千萬條銀線穿過云層</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在觸到墓碑之前</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忽然放輕了腳步</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那些被沖刷的名字</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">開始在石頭上呼吸</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每個(gè)筆畫都蓄著</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">比雨更深的沉默</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我數(shù)著水洼里的年輪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一圈是沖鋒號(hào)黏住的黃昏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一圈是戰(zhàn)壕里未抽完的煙蒂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">最小的那圈</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">正漫過今年新綠的小草</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有人說這是天空在沏茶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">用整片蒼穹當(dāng)陶壺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斟給長(zhǎng)眠的人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可我嘗到的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">分明是硝煙散盡后</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鐵器在泥土里慢慢生銹的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那種清澈的甜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨忽然斜了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">像誰在翻動(dòng)泛黃名冊(cè)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)里傳來列隊(duì)的口令</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滿山松針都踮起腳尖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">接住墜落的星群</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此刻每滴雨珠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">都是一封封 未讀完的家書</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">地址被硝煙熏成月光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">而收信人正把鋼槍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">種成開滿梨花的樹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">當(dāng)我的傘檐開始顫抖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">才聽懂這沙沙聲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是無數(shù)年輕的根須</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在泥土深處</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">反復(fù)背誦春天的誓詞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">他們用身軀折成的紙鳶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此刻正牽著雨線</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">將整座青山緩緩拉近</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">——近到能看見</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨珠里不肯熄滅的晨曦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨停時(shí)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">碑上新苔忽然泛出光暈</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那是一種不會(huì)隨日落</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">褪色的溫度</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滿山雨珠 同時(shí)在葉梢轉(zhuǎn)身</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">向天空寄回</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">整整一個(gè)民族的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晶瑩的眺望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">漁樵老師賞析：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">品讀胡楊林的回憶老師這首《清明的雨》，字字含情，句句泣血，滿是對(duì)英烈的緬懷與崇敬，讀完滿心震撼與動(dòng)容。詩(shī)歌以清明雨為核心意象，用極富詩(shī)意的筆觸，將哀思與敬意揉進(jìn)每一滴雨珠，意境凄美又莊重，情感深沉而熾熱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">開篇以雨作時(shí)間針腳，將四月哀思縫進(jìn)大地，筆觸細(xì)膩溫柔，卻藏著沉甸甸的敬意。寫雨落墓碑時(shí)放輕腳步，讓英烈名字在石上呼吸，把對(duì)先烈的敬畏寫得淋漓盡致；水洼里的年輪，藏著沖鋒號(hào)、戰(zhàn)壕煙蒂，寥寥數(shù)筆勾勒出崢嶸歲月，將歷史與當(dāng)下相連，讓英烈形象鮮活可感。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> “鋼槍種成開滿梨花的樹”“根須背誦春天的誓詞”，意象新奇動(dòng)人，道盡英烈以身軀換山河無恙的壯舉。詩(shī)歌無直白吶喊，卻以含蓄文字訴說英烈長(zhǎng)眠、精神永存的真諦，雨珠化作未讀完的家書，寄著民族眺望，將家國(guó)情懷與緬懷之情推向高潮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 全詩(shī)意境悠遠(yuǎn)，文筆雋永，融清明哀思、家國(guó)大義、英烈精神于一體，既是祭英烈的深情詩(shī)作，也是致敬英雄的時(shí)代贊歌，讀來催人淚下，更讓人珍惜當(dāng)下山河無恙、歲月安康。</span></p>