<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">流浪的云</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">你就這樣悄悄地走了</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">沒有留下</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一句振聾發(fā)聵的話語</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">像一粒塵埃</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">隱入在泥土里</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">你佝僂著身子</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">像一只彎曲的弓</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">躺在暮色里</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">來不及</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">為你唱一首肅穆的挽歌</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">你就隨風(fēng)而去</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">你彌留下一泓沐歌</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">搖曳在暮色圍攏的夜</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">虔誠的靈魂啊</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">你慢些走</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">再讓兒女們看你一眼</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">你完成了煉獄之旅</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">進(jìn)得天堂的圣門</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">祝福你</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">喧囂的世界你離場了</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">安息吧</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">孤單的魂魄</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">紙糊的鮮衣怒馬</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">馱著游蕩的孤魂</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">嗩吶聲聲</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">撕裂頭頂?shù)撵F霾</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><u>華祥老師的精彩點(diǎn)評；</u></b></p><p class="ql-block">哀音低徊，筆墨含愴，讀之令人心折。</p><p class="ql-block">以流云、塵埃為喻，寫離別悄然而至；佝僂如弓，暮色長眠，寥寥數(shù)筆，盡繪人世死生之寂。不及挽歌相送，已隨風(fēng)塵歸去，字句間存至情至孝，悱惻動人。</p><p class="ql-block">后半轉(zhuǎn)涅槃之意，歷煉獄修行，終入天堂圣門，悲戚中生出寬慰。末句紙馬魂行、嗩吶裂霧，俗景入詩，蒼涼入骨。</p><p class="ql-block">全篇無繁辭堆砌，以素筆寫深情，哀而不傷，寂而有暖。死生輪回、魂安歸途之旨，蘊(yùn)于淺語，余韻綿長，誠為悼亡佳作也。</p>