<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span> 五言律詩，是中國傳統(tǒng)詩歌的一種體裁，簡稱五律，屬于近體詩范疇。此體發(fā)源于南朝齊永明時(shí)期，其雛型是沈約等講究聲律、對偶的新體詩，至初唐沈佺期、宋之問時(shí)基本定型，成熟于盛唐時(shí)期。全篇共八句，每句五個字，有仄起、平起兩種基本形式，中間兩聯(lián)須作對仗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贊“好面師”饅頭鋪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 劉玉琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巷口新開肆，屏傳遞遠(yuǎn)音。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">申時(shí)興市早，酉刻掩簾沉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巧手蒸佳味，誠心聚庶襟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">炊煙盈野陌，長隊(duì)入幽深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">九江老年大學(xué)聲樂班在廬山研學(xué)感賦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 宛初明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">匡山開境界，庭院露天場。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云鬢花搖步，風(fēng)姿映靚妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歌聲音脆亮，戲劇韻悠揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲曲江山美，情深似海洋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">馬影桃園采風(fēng)兼聽高先生授南散曲感吟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">余江英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">丙午春深至，幽林孕翠枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">果園初潤色，南曲亦清奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">農(nóng)友邀田舍，尊師釋惑疑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愿祈桃燦日，雅韻伴簫吹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">赴瑯琊山采風(fēng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蔡新初</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">環(huán)滁凝秀色，一徑入煙岑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">泉響穿林壑，松陰覆石深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">亭留醉翁韻，鐘送梵家音。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">逸意隨云遠(yuǎn)，悠然愜素心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游韶山毛主席銅像廣場 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梅士春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圓夢踏韶山，隨團(tuán)趕早班。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五州游客至，四海貴賓還。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">放眼觀銅像，凝情獻(xiàn)玉環(huán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">偉人功蓋世，感動樂開顏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詠歐陽文忠公滁州之功 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 婁劍平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 滁守千秋業(yè)，雄風(fēng)仰醉翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 寬仁昭善政，簡惠裕民豐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 文氣沖星斗，亭光耀昊穹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 德威垂萬古，遺澤滿寰中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">送友赴瑯琊尋幽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">伍海林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兼程向翠丘，策轡赴滁州。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曉日登臨處，薰風(fēng)景物稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">穿云追曲徑，涉水訪清流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此去憑欄望，心隨白鷺浮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">參觀小岡村大包干有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高淼蘭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">民以食為天，尋求意志堅(jiān)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">包干沖險(xiǎn)浪，破局譜新篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">富庶良謀顯，強(qiáng)邦史冊鐫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">康莊衢路達(dá)，引領(lǐng)豎旗鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小崗村</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 郭小青</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 驚雷寰宇震，潮起小崗村。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">勇立分田策，拼開錮世昏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一朝倉囤滿，累載戶庭溫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">創(chuàng)舉開新境，清評史冊存。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人生</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">彭菊萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">少小遭霜雪，家山斷雁音。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒衣雛手浣，野灶幼年斟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">機(jī)柕傳真決，田園墾瘠霖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今宵閑煮酒，笑看晚來心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">瑯琊山采風(fēng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 江 波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">環(huán)滁峰蔚秀，幽谷瀉清泉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">亭翼臨流古，林深隱寺煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醉翁遺韻在，野老雅情牽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">踏境尋真意，風(fēng)懷寄碧天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">趣釣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">劉學(xué)峰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">抽梢魚戲躍，水底眾鰭飆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">餌料香噴溢，浮樁攪動搖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清風(fēng)垂柳逗，細(xì)浪撫綸聊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有否憑時(shí)運(yùn)，幽閑伴樂遙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老有所樂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳述仁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清晨鍛煉忙，跑步去操場。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">擊劍如風(fēng)速，球桿似箭揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歌聲欣數(shù)里，舞曲震諸方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每日尋常樂，身心更健康。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">護(hù)者芳姿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">方海明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">素袂抱芳馨，懷慈佑萬靈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朝斟寒暖意，夜靜守康寧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">妙手扶羸弱，柔襟慰客形。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嘉時(shí)崇懿德，玉質(zhì)自娉婷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小崗壯舉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文志輝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">包田祈世昌，勇毅破民荒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十八簽紅印，群黎敢逆?zhèn)?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">茅廬開道路，粒粒腹肌腸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">涉險(xiǎn)迎風(fēng)起，丹心護(hù)梓鄉(xiāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詠夏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陶祖賜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春姑一下場，夏嫂就梳妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳綠千堤美，荷紅萬水香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛙游蟬直叫，燕舞彩云翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陣陣涼風(fēng)至，齊齊滿盛裝！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">過鄱陽湖大橋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">徐潔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">放眼橫橋近，湖平浩水寬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">輕車隨景遠(yuǎn)，清卷逐風(fēng)殘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">野浦連天色，澄波漾翠瀾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浮沉皆是客，心靜自無寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄉(xiāng)居</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倪萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梓里塵囂遠(yuǎn)，居貧歲月悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">疏篁圍草舍，曲徑對溪流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浮世還如夢，吟詩不肯休。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吾心歸淡泊，安樂度春秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老城散步有吟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蔡禮東</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是夜汛堤行，涼風(fēng)拂面輕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">星橋光彩溢，月棹水煙生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老院今何在？新街固自迎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑來思舊事，獨(dú)坐伴長更。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 本周詩詞班習(xí)，各位詩友作品韻律規(guī)整和諧，對仗工整妥帖，詩作起承轉(zhuǎn)合脈絡(luò)清晰，章法從容有度。全篇字句飽含詩情，意境悠然雅致，能看出大家平日篤學(xué)不倦，整體習(xí)作值得相互品讀研習(xí)。</span></p>