<p class="ql-block">出句表達的意思是：在清冷的氛圍中，殘留的信箋與冷卻的墨跡，凝聚著對故鄉(xiāng)的思念與夢境。以下是對出句的詳細解析：</p><p class="ql-block">.殘箋冷墨：描繪了信紙的短缺和墨跡的冷卻，暗示時間的流逝和情感的沉淀，也可能象征著未盡的心事或斷續(xù)的思緒。</p><p class="ql-block">.凝鄉(xiāng)夢：將這種清冷的氛圍與對故鄉(xiāng)的思念相結合，說明這些殘留的筆墨承載著對故鄉(xiāng)的回憶和夢境。</p><p class="ql-block">出句劃分：</p><p class="ql-block">殘箋/冷墨/凝/鄉(xiāng)夢</p><p class="ql-block">偏正/偏正/動/偏正</p><p class="ql-block">出句：水勇</p><p class="ql-block">點評：木子</p><p class="ql-block">作品全貌</p><p class="ql-block">#接龍6月2日每日一練</p><p class="ql-block">1. 水勇 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">2. 真誠相待 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">瘦影孤燈惹客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">3. 老驥（王治華） </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">紅葉秋風寄客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">4. 墨羽晨曦 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢</p><p class="ql-block">剩飯涼茶脹肚皮</p><p class="ql-block">5. 夢溪 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">濁酒清茶解客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">6. 北方江南 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">秋水孤舟寄客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">7. 勤棋詩話 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">紅樹清香解別愁。</p><p class="ql-block">8. 春暖花開 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">短帽粗衣刻母恩。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">9. 天天快樂的老楊 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">淡飯清湯憶舊情。</p><p class="ql-block">10. 曾經(jīng) </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">老木寒云滿故城。（集）</p><p class="ql-block">11. 東籬采菊 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">濁酒陳詞慰旅愁。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">12. 笑神清風（干豆腐才哥） </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢，</p><p class="ql-block">斷雁西風寄 客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">13. 眉千度 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">瘦月孤杯醉客魂。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">14. 春暖花開 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">明月清風入客心。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">15. 姜道陽 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">孤盞寒燈綰客腸。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">16. 幸福永相隨 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">舊宅寒燈照客心。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">17. 弄嘯堂 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">斷雁寒云繞故山。</p><p class="ql-block">18. 撿石者 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">皓月稀星攬客懷。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">19. 風雪一點紅 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">拙筆疏詞寄故情。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">20. 漫步 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">美酒陳詞醉客心。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">21. 修竹山人(項錦華) </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">雁字魚書寄戀情。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">22. 郝鳳云 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">古畫高風隱世情。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">23. 皓月千里 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">落日深秋入客心。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">24. 陳莉 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">凄雨寒風逐路人。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">25. 雷啟燦 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">別墅豪車憶母恩。</p><p class="ql-block">26. 培玉 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">野渡輕煙系故思。</p><p class="ql-block">27. 千慮愚者 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">濁酒孤床醉旅愁。</p><p class="ql-block">28. 楊學華 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">壯志雄心消故愁。</p><p class="ql-block">29. 姜道陽 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">衰草荒階引客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">30. 玥???? </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">暗燭寒衣系母心。</p><p class="ql-block">31. 鈴兒叮當 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">瘦月寒霜系客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">32. 暗香 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">孤月寒星思故人。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">33. 何芳草 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">落日孤蓬載客心。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">34. 楊學華 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">濁酒香茶洗旅塵。</p><p class="ql-block">35. 心陽光 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">淡硯孤霜綰客腸。</p><p class="ql-block">36. 林 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">舊曲新詞訴別情。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">37. 閑適 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">野渡孤舟踏浪花。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">38. 禹德亮 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">瘦馬悲風碎客心。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">39. 閑云野鶴 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">舊影清容結故情。</p><p class="ql-block">40. 游淑云 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">寶馬香車贈美人。</p><p class="ql-block">41. 淘雨軒</p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">寂月疏星牽旅愁。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">42. 玥???? </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">老巷孤槐守歲華。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">43. 步行者 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">淡飯粗茶話友情。</p><p class="ql-block">44. 陳益富 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">斷笛孤風寄客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">45. 冬之韻 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">粗飯清茶守俗心。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">46. 巧巧不了了 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">夜月秋鴻動客心。</p><p class="ql-block">47. 豐衣足食 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">玉漏銀燈照淚痕。</p><p class="ql-block">48. 有良 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">落日昏鴉惹客悲。</p><p class="ql-block">49. 難得糊涂 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">缺月昏燈添客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">50. 悟 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢</p><p class="ql-block">宿草清琴涌客愁</p><p class="ql-block">51. 菜鳥 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢</p><p class="ql-block">征雁飛云寄客情</p><p class="ql-block">52. 云淡風清</p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">遠雁斜陽動客情。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">53. 壟上行 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">濁酒孤舟惹淚痕。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">54. 菜鳥 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">明月清風伴路人</p><p class="ql-block">55. 平沙落雁（任輝盛） </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">濫調(diào)陳詞話梓愁。</p><p class="ql-block">56. 倔強的胡楊 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">笑語歡聲頌友情。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">57. 薛乃清(海南) </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">高枕濕巾憶故人。</p><p class="ql-block">58. 孔繁瓊 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">翠竹涼風憶古詩。</p><p class="ql-block">59. 金蛇狂舞 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">美酒深樽慰友心。</p><p class="ql-block">60. 金蛇狂舞 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">厚祿瓊樓入仕途。</p><p class="ql-block">61. 薛乃清(海南) </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">晦月寒星惹客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">62. 劉南山 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">深宅大堂憶畫音。</p><p class="ql-block">63. 楊學華 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">淡飯清茶敘友情。</p><p class="ql-block">64. 一帆風順 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">靜夜寒聲裹客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">65. 行云流水 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">斷笛空階滴夜霜。</p><p class="ql-block">66. 緣聚 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">蜀水巴山是故人。</p><p class="ql-block">67. 大橘為重 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">秀色光山醉客情。</p><p class="ql-block">68. 伍家衛(wèi) </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">濁酒狂書表客懷。</p><p class="ql-block">69. 酒逢千杯 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">古道寒煙斷客腸。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">70. 追夢鵬（貴州）楊 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">碎月疏簾入畫樓。</p><p class="ql-block">71. 婷娜 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">翠竹蘚階抒古詩。</p><p class="ql-block">72. 金融 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">老鬢寒霜念故園。</p><p class="ql-block">73. 柳城含笑 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">皓月清霜染客程。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">74. 絲茅草 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">驛路梅花解客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">75. 彭嘉懷 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢：</p><p class="ql-block">老旦新妝演世情。</p><p class="ql-block">76. 我 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">濁酒清詞念故知。</p><p class="ql-block">77. 七字余句 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">落葉寒聲入客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">78. 東耳玉口云</p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">斷葦寒潮送雁聲。</p><p class="ql-block">評：優(yōu)</p><p class="ql-block">79. 天天快樂的老楊 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">破灶寒窯覓舊蹤。</p><p class="ql-block">80. 菡萏 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">弦月流星釣客愁。</p><p class="ql-block">81. 謳歌 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">古樹青山似故園。</p><p class="ql-block">82. 曾海明 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">壯志豪情誦國詩。</p><p class="ql-block">83. 曙光 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">颯爽英姿戰(zhàn)敵莞。</p><p class="ql-block">84. 東旭 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢；</p><p class="ql-block">宿雨疏風惹舊愁。</p><p class="ql-block">85. 惠風和暢 </p><p class="ql-block">殘箋冷墨凝鄉(xiāng)夢，</p><p class="ql-block">血雨腥風壯士魂。</p><p class="ql-block">拈詩入韻文學社：水勇，陳慶華，木子</p><p class="ql-block">審核組：姜道陽，許家榮，公天下</p><p class="ql-block">海生明月</p><p class="ql-block">每日一練詩聯(lián)群指導：水勇，木子</p>